Saturday, November 29, 2008

sixth annontaion

Edwards, Robert. "bank robbers bobnnie and clyde kidnapped policeman in 1933." http//homepages.rootsweb.ancestry.com/ozarkgalhistorybonnieclyde.html. october 10,1999. spring field mo leader presssuday. 29 Nov 2008

This article tells me about how the policeman tom was kidnapped by the two ruthless and harmful couple bonnie and clyde.this also tells me some backround information about how they rob a few banks.this gives me lot of details about bonnie clyde far as the kidnappeds that they did.

this tells me a whole lot about how they did such bad things to people and crimees that they have commended in dallas texas.this article also talks how bonnie and clyde was looking for an ford v-8 automobile to steal at that time.at this time this was during the great depression.

Monday, November 24, 2008

mini research paragraph

is beyonce better singer then mariah carey?

I found that mariah carey is an better singer then beyonce,there are lot's of reasons one is that mariah carey she can hit high notes.two mariah carey can also does screams. when she sings she does this kind of thing where eshe's puts her hand behind her ear and she screams and just keeps sing.third mariah carey sings about her life at times of how's she feeling at that point.BEYonce is good at sing because she's pretty and she makes more money and she knoe how to dance very well in her videos.beyonce also has a whole lot of songs that people love to listen to.
everyone vote and evryday said that mariah carey is the better singer and sh'e excellent at it.

Wednesday, November 12, 2008

In conclusion paragraph

In the book squealar, napoleon snowball in order to get there way.they told lies and they also made up stores si that they could have an good reputation.Also they a were the ones who had to get to opress others.For the final conclusion mostly talking about russia basically what the pigs are doing.

Sunday, November 9, 2008

final draft of animal farm

Although animal farm appears to be an story that's tells about animals.This it actually an allegory of what happened Russia.AS of the background info on animal farm is that humans got to overthrown animals there trying to take over the farm.In animal farm the pigs use stories and lies to inspire others to empower themselves and oppress animals of the farm.

There are three stories that pigs are for stories and inspire others,
the story is when old major speech was spoken among him.For example it said "comrades you have heard already about strange dream that i had last night.But i will come to the dream later.Also major speech was a very good speech for all of the animals to hear.Another story is the windmill ,Comrades, he i trust that every animal here appreciates that comrades napoleon has made in taking this extra labour upon himself his,and shouting down the sheep who had begun it was the favor of the windmill.

Finally the story of rebellion,animal farm were perpetually fighting among themselves and were also ripely starving to death.Also as for nevertheless they were both thoroughly frighted by the rebellion on animal farm.For stories that empowers there are threes for stories that's empowers.one empower strangling of leader)n a house animal mere sty.Nevertheless, some of the animals were disturbed when they heard that pigs nor only took their meals on and used drawing rooms and recreation rooms.

But they slo slept their beds. They had also heard that noe that the now shall sleep in the beds in the farmhouse.Secondly is the milk and aplplesl comrades hr cried you do not imagine ,i hope that we pigs are this in a spurt of selfishness and privilege.our sole object in taking these things is to preserve our health.The is one last story to empower that the eggs,on Sunday morning squeal announced that the hens ,who had just come in to lay again must surrender there eggs.when the rens heard this they raised a terrible out cry.

There are three stories that are opress ones, one is taking away ,one is taking away the meetings.For example pigs could do because napleon was being very bad and treating them bad.oppress story two is that they napleon and squlear tricks the pigs use and take there's rights.Last but not least there were so much going onon the animalo farm.

The last story of the opress,is that some of the animals had move to be with humans.For example mollie left to be with humans because of the the drama thatwas going on in this farm.Also they were also talking about the beasts englaind.
To restate my thesis In animal farm the oigs use stories and lies to inspire others to enpower themsevles and to opress animals of the farm.In conclusion,this final drafft talks about each stories and itgives strong examples andit also gives you qoutes and supporting details.


I voice my three main points in this paragraph.for the so what part yes there were in real life there are to be some lessons learned.Such as to take people rights you can if you were to do something that' s not rights yes you can.Also to empower somone yes you can empower some one to mean in other words u can give someone the power to be over you so those are the connections far as the so what part.

Thursday, November 6, 2008

Animal farm rough draft

Although animal farm appears to be an story that's Tell's about animals.This is it an allegory of what happened Russia.AS of the background info on animal farm is that humans got to over throw by animal there trying take over the farm.In animal farm the pigs use stories and lies to inspire others to empower themselves to oppress animals of the farm.

There are three stories that the are pigs to inspire others.one story is when old major speech was spoken among him. For example it said "comrades you have heard already about the strange dream that i had last night.But i will come to the dream later.I have something else also old major sppeech is very good speech for the animals to hear.Another reason is the windmill,Comrades he i trust that everyday animal here appreciates the that comrades napleon has madetaking extra labour upon himself.Also at this snowball sprang to his,and shouting down the sheep.

Finally the story of the rebellion, animal farm)were perpetually fighting among themsevles and were alos rabidly starving to death.Also as for nevertheless they were both throughly frighted by the rebellion on animal farm.For this cause the story of rebellion is that they were treaty and such an bad way.

In conclusion,because of these stories to inspire others those are the three stories for the inspire part

fifth anontation

Anneman, Alan. "Bonnie and clyde together again." brightlights flims journal . feb 2004. 6 Nov 2008 .


In this secondary source this is an flim that started out in the sixties that was the shoot up revisted.This also tells me how they started out and it,s tells me that they were and ride or die couple and that they were there for one another no matter what happened.this tells me a whole lot about cyde barrow as of if he was a short fuse.


Bonnie & Clyde has only solidified its position as the Sixties movie, the film that shattered the old "family entertainment" Hollywood once and for all and allowed American films to grow up.Also Bonnie & Clyde changed all of that. Somehow, the guy name Penn and Beatty decided they wouldactually use Benton and Newman's script to break every rule in the Hollywood book. Benton and Newman had already stripped out the artsy, poetic dialogue of Broadway.

fourth annotation

"The death of Bonnie and Clyde." Essortment. 2003. Page Wise inc.. 6 Nov 2008 .

This specific essay really focuses on the death of bonnie and Clyde but it also gives some background information to. It talks about how when they were ever in tight situations and could not get away luck would always save them.This article describes bonnie and Clyde crimes in details.

Bonnie and Clyde did crime across 6 states for a couple years. Also it talks about how the low has been narrowing the barrow gang one by one until they get to Bonnie and Clyde.This talks more about the barrow gang and what role each person had in the gang. There were some reasons given as to why some of the members joined the gang. It talks about how all of the men in this gang had high fire power and that the gangs best weapon was the B.A.R. Which they used to kill most of their victims. Another thing discussed was how these two had a Friend who got them ambushed by the police in which resulted in their death.

Sunday, October 26, 2008

Third annotation


Geringer, joseph. "Bonnie and clyde Depression-era duet." crime libray. 2007. 26 Oct 2008
This source gives me a lot of primary sources and lots of sites that i can go to to find more things about them and etc.This site gives me a lot of backround information about them as they became man and woman.The source basically leads me to when they met one another.

In this web source it tells me a lot of things about bonnie and clyde such so many reads that u could read about as they became man and woman .The follwing reads that they have is the depression era-duet,as of how they meet ,also the waco jail break,and etc.so this is explaining the differents in takes on how both of them were before they ad also how they were when they met.


Friday, October 24, 2008

Thesis satement

Although bonnie and Clyde were the portrayed as exciting romantic couple,they were ruthless romantic couple,they were actually robbers and killers. In fact bonnie and clyde robbed over 8 banks and killed innocent people.Bonnie and clyde would also have speicals hideouts when they were ready to do a crime they would have spacial places.

Event though bonnie and clyde were crimmals but they do these things for the own good.Bonnie and clyde were just board with their lives and need something to do to get by. They were actually deeply in love and also were very good kind and careful people. Bonnie and clyde were know as the worst in texas at the time of the great depression.This is how bonnie and clyde were to people they were harmful and just very dangerous.

Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Second annotation

Bowman, Bob. "HOW BONNIE & CLYDE WERE CAUGHT." Texas Escapes. 1998-2007. Blueprints For Travel. 21 Oct 2008 .

This source talks about the Louisiana ambush of Bonnie and Clyde. This will help me because it will inform me of just how intense their capture was.This is a secondary source because this person was not present at this time but it is a benefit to my research.

It tells me some things that happened in history that could have ruined the capture of bonnie and Clyde. This passage actually gives me great information that tells me how a Friend of bonnie and Clyde help the police posse ambush them. Bonnie and Clyde were totally clueless as to what was going to happen to them and believe that they were going to just live their last days on but then all of a sudden police men stood up a the spray of bullets begin the two couple were immediately dead.

First annotation

"The trails end." Census Diggins. 2001 - 2007 . 20 Oct 2008 .

This internet source helps me becuse provides me with alot of imformatin. It tells me about bonnie and Clyde background imformation and also somethin very important their geneology. Some thing else provided were a few primary source news paper clipping from back in this error were provided along with police and criminal reports on the young couple.

In the prreviouse parograph the reason that I said that Bonnie and Clydes Geneology was vvery important is simply because of the fact that I was under the impression that Bonnie and Clyde did not have any children but later on I found that Clyde was previousel married and was properly divorced and also had 2 children by his previouse wife. Also some other good things that I have received from this page were some news paper articles that told me the real facts of what happened to bonnie andd Clyde instead of just fantasy tales.

Sunday, October 19, 2008

irb log

well ms melville i have to get a new book because my mom has to take that book that i had back to the libary so i have to get another book.

Thursday, October 16, 2008

NHD TOPIC:Bonnie &cylde/top selection

I choose this topic beause i would like to kno what went on back in the day,when Bonnie and cylde were robing banks and alsoduring killings.Also to see how they were so popular for robing banks.i also think that it's very important to leran aout them and to also to learn about other things that they did when they were komed as Bonnie and cylde.the reason why i have chossen this tpoic if it wasnt' for bonnie in cyldde it wouldnt be a bad influence to rob bank which is bad to do.

Tuesday, October 7, 2008

The most dangerous game final copy

In the most dangerous game Rainford vaules liberty.One reason is that he kills people ivan and zaroff.Rainsford doesn't seem to care another reason he sleeps soundly After murder.Also he hardly stops to think that's other people might hate to have opinon.Finally taking zaroff position.One he has never in a better bed.Also finally hardly stop to think that he did do something very bad.The teo quotes that i pick were bob rainsford this world divded in to.Two kinds of people the hunter and the hunted.Also my my other was martin turn in early,please.Then count will take cure of eve me cont zaroff indeed i small.In my conclusionthese rainford vaules liberty specific reason.

Sunday, October 5, 2008

Heat

author:Geneva Holliday
page number 22
summary:well its about this woman name crytal and a man name chevy who addicted and finding it hard concentrate at work and no wonder she's got a stud in antigua who's beginning to mean to her then just steamy sex.

Tuesday, June 3, 2008

wednesday meeting

we were talking about how we were going to go down south Philly to get materials so that we could start planning to make the plants.we research in the classes as a whole to see what kind of pots should we get to so that NO WOULD HAVE TOOKED IT SO THAT WHAT WE HAVE DID.

Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Inpendent hours

My experience was good me i really love to help my people in cuding the commuity.I did a whole lot of things. such as like babysitting helping around the house and also d other things etc.It was very trying to do this because i had to make sure that i had my work done and had to hard. My mom also i have to make sure that she's ok. that's all.

Tuesday, May 20, 2008

May 20 reflection

for these few months it has been fun working with my team members and also just sit with one another and just brainstorm and also just sort our ideas.we have did a lot of brainstorm now it's time to to do the plaining.but now all we have to do is get the materials and get to work.so that what i want to keep my focus on so far.

Monday, May 12, 2008

Fridays meeting reflection may 9

For Fridays meeting we had a class discuss about when we went to the national constitution center.we talk about what we did we also what places we were going to put things such a garden in the center of the constitution. we also took pictures and we talk about them. My group members also recorded things and they were talking about the trees and what they thought would be good.we sat in on a class discuss wand we talk about it and we and got attendance sheet for our members.so that what happened on Friday's reflection.

Wednesday, April 30, 2008

plans for thursday

is that i would do try to do some research for my group members. so my plans is to talk with my group members and to take notes and to do stuff like to see and find some more thins with my group members and to also some things liketslk with them and sse what they want to do so that's all.

Fridays meeting reflection

friday meeting was good we talk about a whole lot such as who was going to do what like for example who was going to be what like who was going to recored and who was going to be the the time keeper. so that what we were basically talking about and we was also was talking about how we are going to do such as who going to do the garden and who's going to do the school benfinication.every sahre wabout what they thought about the who garden thing.the role i would like to play is to take good notes on the things that we do in our group.

Thursday, April 24, 2008

my role in the group

i would like my role to be to give ideas and speak with my pairs.And see what they think about what we can do to make the school a better place.so that what i would like my role to be. and also make sure that everyone has part and then make sure they could do stuff and mske sure that there on top of everything.

Thursday meeting on april 10

On Thursday we walk around the school to see what we can do far as putting more things in the school.We also went floor to floor to see the other rooms to see what we could use those rooms for so that when we the other students come in w have more thing in the school for our students.so that's what we was doing.We also was looking outside the school to see what we can do out there to make our school mo-re interesting thing to make our school still out.so that what went on on thursday meeting.

Thursday, April 17, 2008

My plans for today

my plans for today is to see and find out what up on my team and what we are trying to do.so that i can do some research on the internet to fine out some more ideas.i was thinking that we could try to start on it and get a fresh star at it so that way we could find out more stuff about the garden so that we can do some good things in our school. i also think that it would be good to see what we could do in our school to make it look better.and for our new freshman that are coming in. so that's and that's whati was thinking.

Wednesday, April 16, 2008

My plans for Tomorrow

My plans for tomorrow is to just get some more plans and ideas and alos go over some things with my team members.and find out more ideas tosee what we can put in the school.so we need to a have a discussion on haw this would work for our school.so that all i have to say.

My reflection on friday Meeting FOR THE GARDEN

well we were talking about how we were going to put more things in the school for example.we were thinking about putting a study area for students to study.we also were we slpit us into two teams. so base on what we were talking about was how we were going to make more things for the school.so that basically that WHAT'S UP IN THE GARDEN GROUP.

Monday, March 31, 2008

My NHD reflection

My project was on chinese immigrantion and it was a great experience for me to learn for the first time.It also was good to learn about other people culture then yours because you never know what people ave gone through in life,NHd
was very stressful for me because i have never experience nothing like this before.It was good experience for our whole school to do the Nhd.I think that i have strive hard to get where im at and i had got a c for the first time.But next year would be a better one.

Tuesday, March 25, 2008

service learning project

well what i had in mind was to voluteer at my old daycare canter or i could do lots of things for service learning so that would like to do. i was also thinking about working with reshay and erin and so think that would be the best thing to do.so that's what in thinking.o i was thinking that i could work with others to with me and reshay and erin also and other's.we are going to be fundrasing for the lukimmane for the children that are sick.so that's what i had in mind with service learning project. so those are the things i ahd in mind.

Thursday, March 6, 2008

My NHD reflection

NHd was very hard why because it was my first experience and i really thought that at some of the point it was going to be easy which it was.But it was very stessful and sometimes i didn't know if i was coming or going.Nhd was a great experience to learn because i never even heard of nhd so i was dying to know what it was like.I am also glad that i really learn this experience so that i do next year is that i can stirve next year and do better and get a better grade which i ahd got a good grade anyway.I truly really think that this was agreat exprerience.i would'nt like to do this again but this i this would help me inthe long run.

Thursday, January 24, 2008

what should my final grade be

Dear Mr. Romero

I think my grade should at least be a b because I think I try so hard to get where i"m at for this 2nd marking. The reason why I say this is because I think that I do try to in your class at times I do get off task but I get things done. I also hope that I get the grade that I ask for. I will like you to know that it has been fun in your class and I have learned a whole lot of in English.For example I have learn how to skip lines for when I have to write a essay. I also love to watch movies and plays in your class I also learn a whole lot of things about the languages in shake spare also by the my favorite is now Mr. Romero I want you to know that you’re a great English teacher and no one could take that away from you and it was very nice to spend these couples months. But I truly think that I really deserve this b so that all I have to say MR. Romero thanks.

Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Benjamin banneker

Benjamin Banneker was born 1731and there were few free blacks in Baltimore country Maryland .He quickly showed an interest in mathematics and in mechanical things. The main work that he did was that he predict a whole lot of things a solar eclipse. He decided to work on an almmac.banneker had to establish the position of the sun moon and planets each year. Then he could make allocutions so he has been looking into mathematics at the age of 22.My reaction to this is that Benjamin bannered things such as the solar eclipse. Also he kept his main focus on his mathematics and also was a black young man who work hard to get where he was and also was a very smart and Intelligent person why because he kept his man on the his work. And he also didn’t let anything stop him from doing that. As reported in the Georgetown Weekly Ledger March 12, 1791, when Banneker was 60, he was appointed, by President George Washington, to a three man team of surveyors headed by Major Andrew Ellicott, Joseph's cousin, to survey the future District of Columbia. Banneker, the paper said, was "an Ethiopian whose abilities as surveyor and astronomer already prove that Mr. [Thomas] Jefferson's concluding that that race of men were void of mental endowment was without foundation. Banneker became fascinated with the patent watch of a friend, Josef Levi. Levi gave Benjamin the watch and he took it apart to 'study its workings." Banneker then carved similar watch pieces out of wood to make, in1752, a wooden clock. Due to its precision (it struck every hour, on the hour, and continued to do so nearly forty years.

Wednesday, January 2, 2008

should huck finn be taught in school

Huck Finn should not be taught in school why because for culture reason and race reason. This hook has racial over tones in it a whole has racial over tones in it a whole lot. The language is also file language such as cursing also wrong spelling errors. This book has a whole lot of violence in it such as tie black’s to trees and on abuse others and also animals abuse. I truly don’t think that this book is using file language such as racial comments. The book to me is very disrespect to African American. From my point of view if I was to write this book I would feel very sad to even put the things that was in the book. Truly the way how they talk about black’s in the book it’s bad and hurt’s me and makes me very mad.so from my point of view again I really don’t think that this book is school material to teach in the class.the other reason why it shouldn't be taught because this book has some bad charaters such racial people that t's treating black's